사람들/나의 가족

애니 2015. 6. 9. 04:11

                                                            "The Search For The Golden Necklace "

 By Irene Heo

In the city of Forest Hills,There were three girls named Claire, Kate, and Ella.

They were best friends. The three girls loved solving mysteries.

One day Kate got a message from Aunt Lisa. It said, Hi Kate.

Remember that gold necklace I always wear, Well I can’t find it.

 I just had it on this morning when I was dropping off your cousin Luke at school. Please help me solve this mystery.

 Aunt Lisa. So right after I read it I called Claire and Ella. We call our team The Mystery Solvers.(For short we call it T.M.S)

I told them about the mystery and they cameto my house right away.

When they came Igot out my IPad and we started to read the message. Then we got out our notebooks.

We started writing all the notes we knew about the mystery. After that I called Aunt Lisa

,But she wouldn't answer so I just called it a day and they left.By the way I’m the leader of the team.

That explains why I say what to do a lot. I went outside to go play with Buster.( My Dog)Then I fell asleep.

The next day me and the other girls decided to go to Claire's today.

 At Claire’s I said, maybe we could go to Aunt Lisa’s house. Then Ella said But where does she live.

I said it only takes about ten minutes to get there. Wait she does have a cat. (Socks) Cats like to play with string.

 Maybe Socks thought her necklace was string! So I called Mom and we went right to Aunt Lisa’s house.

 I went to Sock’s hiding spot and there it was the Golden necklace! Aunt Lisa was so proud of the T.MS.

She gave us a 50 dollar check! We decided to get a new magnifying glass and three t shirts that said The T.M.S. team when there’s a mystery just call for help. We had a party that only me, Buster, Claire, Mr. Whiskers(her Cat), and Ella and her dog Macy. We had a blast. there was cotton candy, snow cones, and a big barbeque. I had so much fun. Except I had to go to sleep early cause the next day was school.

I can’t wait for our next mystery.

When there’s a mystery

just call for help!

The End

 

 

 

"혜인아~

큰 이모가 네 글을 읽게 되어 너무 기쁘단다.

사실 이번 달 15일 상해 가는 비행기 안에서 처음 읽었는데, 이제서야 답장을  쓰는구나! ( 미안~ )

그리고 네가 미국 달라스에서 태어 나고 자라서 벌써 2학년인데, 사진으로만 모습을 보게 되어 아쉬운 맘이 있단다.

아마 5년 안에는 이모가 너를 직접 볼 수 있지 않을까?

작년에는 큰 이모도 한국에 14년 반 만에 돌아온 탓에 적응하느라 너무 바빠서 연락을 자주 못했지만

올 해는 너의 글을 읽을때마다 답장을 하마~ ^ ^

 

우선 너의 글을 읽으면서 들었던 첫 느낌은 " 아~ 혜인이 넘 부럽다! " 였어.

왜냐구? 이모는 영어는 읽을 수 있지만 회화나 작문은 아직 많이 부족 하거든~

그리고 네가 앉아서 부지런히 글쓰는 모습이 떠올라서 마음이 흐뭇했단다.

 

엄마를 통해서 네가 학교 생활도 얼마나 즐겁게, 열심히 하는지 들었거든.

물론 뛰어난 성적도 얻었다는 소식과 함께 "Superior reader " 상도 받았다는 얘기도 전해 들었지~

이모는 너의 우수한 성적보다 너의 적극적인 태도와 성실함에  더 큰 박수를 보내고 싶구나!

 

아~ 이젠 너의 첫 글을 읽은 소감을 다시 얘기할께~

T.M.S 멤버가 어떻게 일을 해결할까? 궁금해 하면서 읽었는데, 반지를 가져간 범인은 Socks 였더구나!

흥미로운 점은 주인공인 Kate에겐 Buster ( dog ), Claire 에겐 Mr. whiskers ( cat) 그리고 Ella 에겐 Macy (dog)

이렇게 모두들 키우는 동물이 있다는 거였어~

네가 이렇게 주인공 인물들과 함께 동물들을 다 등장시켰다는 것은  평소에 네가 얼마나 반려 동물들에 대한 애정이

큰지 이모가 알 수 있었단다.

 

혜인아!

방학인데도 일찍 일어나 스스로 너의 할 일을 예쁘게 잘하는 네가 기특하구나!

두번째 글에 대한 이야기는 이틀 뒤에  할꺼니까 그때 또 만나자꾸나~

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Thank you for the message you wrote. I thought it would be more cool if I put in the animals. Truly it wasn't as easy as I thought. I'm thinking in the next story I'm gonna put you in!!You are such a great aunt because you encourage me so much.
THANK YOU!!
혜인~
I' m very happy to get in touch with you.And I'm really thank you for thinking well of me. ~ ^ ^
i was motivated to study English hard ,too
i'm looking forward to visiting you.